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I fell down into a hole of despair,
and felt a pain that no one can bear.
Lost in the dark and stuck without a way,
I feel less pain the longer I stay.
My feelings and emotions are slowly numbing,
my hopes and my dreams are already crumbling.
I fell down and now I can't get back up,
now all I can see is a half empty cup.
Lost my strength and lost my will,
all I can do now is just stay still.
I look up to see the bright eyes,
staring at me while my soul slowly dies.
One step and another yet I still can't see the light,
another step, and I fall back into the night.
Here is a darkness I cannot stand,
my hope is holding on by the last strand.
Someone save me before I completely lose my way,
please don't leave me here for another day...
Where is the light. Where is my hope.
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LucRae1 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very good.
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Bemari Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Well written poem.
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Here.
*throws a rope*

Climb this, I'll be sure to hold on,
And will stay by your side until the pain is gone.
I will be sure to guide you to the road that is right,
And I'll find the way home while I hold up this light.
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evil-innocence-16 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This..just..wow..Like it describes me so perfectly. I'm actually speechless. Like, wow ! Amazing job :D
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ChiakiCross Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This truthfully touched me so agonizingly softly.. It's beautifully written and each word holds a longing emotion held in a lonely heart.. It reminds me of words I cannot describe when I reach the peeks of depression and am smothered by numb. I'd love to read more like this, and I love this poem.

I do anime drawings, and I'll be posting some that are a character in a pose with words engulfing the background completely, I'd love to talk about using one of your poems in one of my drawings and giving you the rights to the poem of course, is there any way that'd be possible? This poem or another one would be amazing.
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
*hands flashlight* there's your light....jk i am sorry you feel this way i dont like that feeling it's poop :( if their is a way i can help just let me know lovey :)
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