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FragileI know that you're broken,
And that all your pieces are scattered,
I know that you're bruised,
And that your pale skin is battered.

I can see the scars,
That you're trying to hide,
And I can see the hurt,
Burried beneath your pride.

You're barely holding together,
Your tattered, fraying threads,
The harder you try to keep it in,
The more the hole spreads.

Stop trying to battle alone,
When I'm here with my sword in hand,
I can help you pick up the pieces,
And there'll be nothing we can't withstand.

Don't give up the fight,
My friend who is so fragile,
Take my hand and let me hold you,
Let me love you for a while.

You think

I've Felt This Pain, TooWhy do I have to care so much?
It shouldn't bother me when someone is hurting.
It shouldn't bother me when someone doesn't know what to do.
It shouldn't bother me when someone needs help.
But it does. And every single time, I just try to help.

I want to help.
I want them to feel better and to be okay.
But it hurts when the concern I show is shoved aside and put under, "Oh, you're just exaggerating. I'm fine."

You're not fine. You have bags under your eyes, you're shaky and irritable, and whenever I look at you I can see how much pain you're in.
I see it because I've felt it, too.
Maybe not because of the same event happening, or eve

The MaskThe Mask that Hides the pain
the depth within oneself
to hold it altogether
pretending that everything is Okay

The mask is the fake
the hurt on the inside
that No one will know
it hides all the pain deep inside

This mask that shows no mercy
no pain, no torment
It hides the fake
of the one that is truly in pain

Cause this Mask
is the perfect reflection
a perfect resemblance
of how one feels
about a life that is lost

This Mask is the perfect treasure
hiding behind it
to show no Pain
deep down in this Cruel world

I just WishI wish you cared enough
to know how I truly felt
I wish you understood
what it was like to be me

I wish everything wasn't a lie
I wish that you appreciated me
and not think I was a coward
not think I was a mistake to this world

Everything I have done
why did you hurt me so much?
Why can't I show you how I truly feel
or how much damage you have caused?

I wish you knew when I cried
I wish you knew the pain I felt
I just wish
that you guys actually cared about me

She Used to Love The RainIt's like winter.
Grey and quiet and distant.
It's all sharp edges and
there isn't anything beautiful
or soft.

Do you know the way the world falls silent?
Like holding your breath,
holding, holding...
Like not feeling oxygen grace your lungs
until the spring.

Autumn is all warm colors and cold winds,
but it all fades in a week or two.
And then the rain comes.
The rain that you wish was snow.
The rain that drips from barren branches
and collects in mud puddles that never
really sink into the frozen ground.
The rain that makes you remember
what you wish it made you forget.
The rain...

It's like missing you.

Missing you, an

SinkingRecently I've been sinking
Like a stone into a pond
Having skimmed across the surface
Of life for far too long

Please may I have a new heart
Along with a new mind
I cannot reverse this feeling
No, I'm sorry, not this time

Recently I've been sinking
Into myself like quicksand
No one sees as it swallows me
Each grain a mislaid plan

Please may I crawl inside your love
Mingle hearts until the end
I cannot reverse this feeling
No, I'm sorry, not again

Recently I've been sinking
Such an overused metaphor
But one which is cathartic
When choosing to explore

That I could save you my love
And in time you could save me
As fear and

In my Lover Arms ForeverI've waited for you for a long time
But time has kept us apart
Through the years that has happened
All I wish was to see you for a life time

Time has been cruel to all
But to me this is what fate tells us
Deep inside we were always meant to be
Cause your my lover and forever my future

Its been said to all
that we always had a purpose to live
Now I speak the truth to all
Cause my heart always tells me its right

Its been for so long
that I never had this feeling
Until the day that I met you
I knew that I was free to this world

Life has its moments to all
I have got to say that this was best of all
All the thing that we share

I want to smell the pine.Take me to the forest,
Show me all the sin.
There to meet snow white:
The skin I'm breathing in.
I can smell the river,
It's screaming out my name.
But I'm blinded by the bright white light
It's driving me insane.

Bring me what is mine.
I want to smell the pine.

I have lost the will to speak
As the birds are way too loud.
Flying through the air carefree
My feet can't touch the ground
But you shot me right out of the sky,
Leaving blood across my heart
Now I have to find the water.
I need a place to start.

Bring me what is mine.
I want to smell the pine.
I need some peace of mind.
Not tortured but I'm blind.
What can't you

Six Feet UnderI am six feet under,
Deep underground.
No one can help me,
I don't want to be found.

I was buried this morning,
At quater past three.
My chains are now locked,
I can no longer be free.

They piled on the earth,
To bury me deep.
A change at least,
From being dumped in a heap.

One foot for the people,
Who have betrayed me.
Who then lied and pretended,
Thought I wouldn't see.

Two feet for what they've said,
The times they've made my cry.
The snide remarks and comments,
That made me want to die.

Three feet for the problems,
All of them my fault.
They'd never let me forget them,
Rubbing old wounds with salt.

Four feet for my scars,
Made in th

Self-InflictedSelf-Inflicted

I just hate myself.
  I hate the life that I lead.
    I hate the things that I've done.
      I keep trying to figure out.

       Where it is exactly that I went wrong.
    No matter how hard I try to evade
  And blame others for my actions.
At some point I am forced to accept.

  That the problem resides within me
    And the answer remains absent.
      I am the common dominator.
        I am

Say GoodbyeThat feeling;
a weight upon your chest.
A punch that
sends you reeling,
like the suff'ring
you're concealing...

Do you know what it's like
to stand out in the cold?
Do you know what it's like
to have no one to hold?

When you're alone in a crowd;
oh how you'd like to scream aloud,
but from your throat there comes no sound.
This fire rages inside,
but there's no one in which to confide.
You feel lost without a guide,
so give in and say goodbye!

You're watchin' from the outside lookin' in.
They're laughin',
reveling in hate and sin.
And you're knockin'
but still no answer there has been.

You fall to your knees in the pourin

Your smileI brought a smile upon your face,
and now it seems to be a race,
to see who would walk a thousand miles,
just to see your beautiful smile.
Writing poems that you enjoy,
it is my passion, my favorite toy.
When I know, that I made you smile,
it really seems like, it's worth the while.
So here's a thanks, from me to you,
for reading and also commenting too!
It's all of you guys combined together,
and makes me want to write forever and ever.
I will work hard to improve my writing,
so that you guys will know, that I am trying.

Razor Blades FEEL THE PAINRazor blades
Broken glass
Fire and boiling water
Fists against the wall
Breaking knuckles in the tune
of your still-beating broken heart
of the drums that beat LOUD in your head
Of the voice crying out, screaming NO NO NO
Broken glass and pain, crying out, silent against the rain
Shower's turned out, hot as hell, wash away the pain and blood
Dripping down your skin, rinse away
Fight and pound, scream
Beats in your head let it out
There's pleasure in the pain
It measures who you are
You scream because you're numb, and yet you still hurt
you scream LET ME FEEL
Keep it coming, the beats goes on
You keep marching, keep pounding
Something breaks t

So What Do I Do?If only I could read your mind
If only I could interpret you emotions
Understand what you're going through
See through your eyes
Hear through your ears
Feel through your heart
If only I knew how to help you

But I can't
And I don't
And it's killing me
So what do I do?
Tell me.

Need to Feel PainI feel the hurt
every time I look back
the Pain I always feel
deep inside me

I always have these urges
that I need to feel pain...
it was the only true feeling I felt
and without it I'm lost in this world

I want to cut my arms...
I want to cut my legs
just to watch the blood pouring
and to feel the pain deep inside

I want to hurt...
to know that I can feel in this world
I need to feel pain...
its like a drug to me...

The cuts I love
the pain i can feel
I just want my arms to bleed
and to feel the scars....

Cutting every inch of me
just to feel the pain deep inside
To watch the blood pour down...
on the body that deserve

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Safety RopeWe are humans because we have hope,
hope is our last strand, our safety rope.
But safety ropes can rip and tear,
and all that's left is empty air.
When it's your only reason to live on,
you just got to sing along with the song.
The sad song called life and reality,
with hurt and fatalities.
But sometimes it's all you have left,
and you need to prevent it's theft.
Never let someone steal your hope,
because it is your safety rope.
After you lose it,
you fall into a dark, dark pit.
For now, keep on going farther and farther,
keep on climbing, higher and higher.
Keep on living, keep on wishing,
Keep on smiling, and keep on hopi

Just a dreamThe lonely night softly beckoning me…
trying to get me to see,
trying to seduce me into joining,
instead of just sadly wanting.

The wind whispers to me…
never leaving me be.
Pulling me from the dark night,
where nothing is in sight.

The music screams at me…
just jestingly telling me to join in loudly.
Telling me to scream out my heart,
and to never, ever from here part.

The magicians magically making me,
move along with the yelling sea.
Like a puppet I was drawn,
yelling until the soft dawn.

Bam! I woke up to see the familiar scene,
of my old desk, the party nowhere to be seen.
Here I am, back at my boring hou

The Closed RoomYou,
and me,
we used,
to really be
so happy.
We would walk,
and together talk,
about nothing at all.
All those days that we had fun,
I still can't believe that they're done.
You have left me and I'm so alone,
never picking up whenever I phone.
The sky sings a song so dark and gray,
alone in my room, I cry again today.
You're all I see, through both night and day,
I'm thinking of words that could've made you stay.
but it is now, clear as day to me,
that making you my world, came with a fee.
I need to find the strength inside of me,
need to show my stronger side for her to see.
I will live on and fight, like never before,

Sent from HeavenFrom my heart of greed and wonder,
rings the sound of so much thunder.
The weather inside is so chaotic,
your voice, your beauty, is like magic.

Walking beside you all this time,
wondering why I didn't notice your shine.
Now that I see your beauty and all,
my brain froze and my heart took a fall.

You walked on by surpassing me,
all I could do was watch and see.
You were a goddess sent from above,
to teach me, all about love.

The Cherry BlossomsA petal floating softly,
the sky of the cherry blossoms,
underneath is me,
I was waiting.

Every petal falls slowly,
reaching, feeling,
landing on the ground,
quiet, with no sound.

A soft breeze in the air,
telling me that you were here,
so delicately you looked,
and so I stood up.

Finally the winds freeze,
no sound, no breeze,
I reached out and took a petal,
and gave you my heart.

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I Fell

by *HakunRyozaku, Dec 6, 2012, 6:09:32 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

I fell down into a hole of despair,
and felt a pain that no one can bear.
Lost in the dark and stuck without a way,
I feel less pain the longer I stay.
My feelings and emotions are slowly numbing,
my hopes and my dreams are already crumbling.
I fell down and now I can't get back up,
now all I can see is a half empty cup.
Lost my strength and lost my will,
all I can do now is just stay still.
I look up to see the bright eyes,
staring at me while my soul slowly dies.
One step and another yet I still can't see the light,
another step, and I fall back into the night.
Here is a darkness I cannot stand,
my hope is holding on by the last strand.
Someone save me before I completely lose my way,
please don't leave me here for another day...

I Fellby *HakunRyozaku

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Where is the light. Where is my hope.

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~LucRae1 Feb 25, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

Very good.

~Bemari Dec 7, 2012

Well written poem.

~InvaderZIB13 Dec 7, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Here.
*throws a rope*

Climb this, I'll be sure to hold on,
And will stay by your side until the pain is gone.
I will be sure to guide you to the road that is right,
And I'll find the way home while I hold up this light.

~evil-innocence-16 Dec 6, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

This..just..wow..Like it describes me so perfectly. I'm actually speechless. Like, wow ! Amazing job

~ChiakiCross Dec 6, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

This truthfully touched me so agonizingly softly.. It's beautifully written and each word holds a longing emotion held in a lonely heart.. It reminds me of words I cannot describe when I reach the peeks of depression and am smothered by numb. I'd love to read more like this, and I love this poem.

I do anime drawings, and I'll be posting some that are a character in a pose with words engulfing the background completely, I'd love to talk about using one of your poems in one of my drawings and giving you the rights to the poem of course, is there any way that'd be possible? This poem or another one would be amazing.

~Dezzydo Dec 6, 2012 Student Writer

*hands flashlight* there's your light....jk i am sorry you feel this way i dont like that feeling it's poop

if their is a way i can help just let me know lovey

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