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We are humans because we have hope,
hope is our last strand, our safety rope.
But safety ropes can rip and tear,
and all that's left is empty air.
When it's your only reason to live on,
you just got to sing along with the song.
The sad song called life and reality,
with hurt and fatalities.
But sometimes it's all you have left,
and you need to prevent it's theft.
Never let someone steal your hope,
because it is your safety rope.
After you lose it,
you fall into a dark, dark pit.
For now, keep on going farther and farther,
keep on climbing, higher and higher.
Keep on living, keep on wishing,
Keep on smiling, and keep on hoping.
Hope is the strongest thing I can hold on to right now.
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:iconcontessladymoonlight:
Somehow, I feel like this was taken right out of my own mind. Beautiful!
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HakunRyozaku Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
thank you very much!
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:iconcontessladymoonlight:
Most welcome!
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Bemari Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
Well written poem about life. Good rhyming too.
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HakunRyozaku Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
thanks.
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DelightDreamer Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You have spoken the truth my friend. And nice rhyming, I like it. :clap:
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HakunRyozaku Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
thanks. the truth hurts..
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DelightDreamer Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, but it better to know the truth and knowing how to deal with things down the road.
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