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A petal floating softly,
the sky of the cherry blossoms,
underneath is me,
I was waiting.

Every petal falls slowly,
reaching, feeling,
landing on the ground,
quiet, with no sound.

A soft breeze in the air,
telling me that you were here,
so delicately you looked,
and so I stood up.

Finally the winds freeze,
no sound, no breeze,
I reached out and took a petal,
and gave you my heart.
And so I wait for you...
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
A lovely piece. Wonderful job.
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HakunRyozaku Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
thank you~
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
You're welcome. :aww:
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Serenadethepeople Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like it. I dont know why but any poem that has anything to with flowering trees always just gets me.
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HakunRyozaku Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
Haha thanks! Cherry blossoms holds alot of memories for me.
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Serenadethepeople Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Me too. Theyre just so easy to love. Sittin there bein all cute and buisiness.
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