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Your smile

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I brought a smile upon your face,
and now it seems to be a race,
to see who would walk a thousand miles,
just to see your beautiful smile.
Writing poems that you enjoy,
it is my passion, my favorite toy.
When I know, that I made you smile,
it really seems like, it's worth the while.
So here's a thanks, from me to you,
for reading and also commenting too!
It's all of you guys combined together,
and makes me want to write forever and ever.
I will work hard to improve my writing,
so that you guys will know, that I am trying.
Thanks for all my readers!!! You make me want to keep going!
*thanks ~Elle-Julianna for giving me an idea!
© 2012 - 2024 HakunRyozaku
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NykiiLynn's avatar
this is different then every poem ive read.... i like it, a lot :) :winner: